We have incorporated your comments, so an updated version will contain
them.
karl heinz
On Wed, Jun 10, 2009 at 12:41 AM, McCann
Peter-A001034<pete.mccann@motorola.com> wrote:
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
> for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-civic-address-recommendations-02
> Reviewer: Pete McCann
> Review Date: 09 June 2009
> IETF LC End Date: 09 June 2009
> IESG Telechat date: (unknown)
>
> Summary: Ready with nits
>
> Major issues: none
>
> Minor issues: none
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> Section 3:
>
> s/ambigious/ambiguous/
>
> s/receipients/recipients/
>
> s/in border region/in a border region/
>
> s/PIDF-LO elements/PIDF-LO Elements/
>
> Section 4:
>
> s/interopability/interoperability/
>
> Section 4.1, item 2:
>
> s/whether or not they are/whether or not it is/
>
> Section 4.1:
>
> s/container, however,/container; however,/
>
> Section 4.2.2:
>
> s/exclusively, alternatively/exclusively; alternatively,/
>
> Section 4.2.3:
>
> s/optional or not to be used, and/optional, or not to be used, an/
>
> s/must not be used, street suffixes/must not be used. Street suffixes/
>
> Section 4.2.4:
>
> s/address consideration/address considerations/
>
> Section 4.2.5:
>
> s/local names itself identify/local name itself identifies/
>
> s/may either assist/may assist/
>
> s/In case that/In the case that/
>
> s/docuiment/document/
>
> s/receipients/recipients/
>
> Section 4.2.6:
>
> s/address consideration/address considerations/
>
> s/RECOMMENDED, however,/RECOMMENDED; however,/
>
> Section 6.1.3:
>
> s/Registration are sorted/Registrations are sorted/
>
> Section 6.2:
>
> s/form the official/from the official/
>
> s/Austrian Building an Habitation registry/Austrian Building and
> Habitation registry/
>
> Appendix A:
>
> s/an uniform/a uniform/
>
> s/whole Austria/the whole of Austria/
>
> Section A.1:
>
> s/optional, the other Elements/optional, and the other Elements/
>
> Section A.6:
>
> s/URI to his RFC/URI to this RFC/
>
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