for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-civic-address-recommendations-02
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 09 June 2009
IETF LC End Date: 09 June 2009
IESG Telechat date: (unknown)
Summary: Ready with nits
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
Section 3:
s/ambigious/ambiguous/
s/receipients/recipients/
s/in border region/in a border region/
s/PIDF-LO elements/PIDF-LO Elements/
Section 4:
s/interopability/interoperability/
Section 4.1, item 2:
s/whether or not they are/whether or not it is/
Section 4.1:
s/container, however,/container; however,/
Section 4.2.2:
s/exclusively, alternatively/exclusively; alternatively,/
Section 4.2.3:
s/optional or not to be used, and/optional, or not to be used, an/
s/must not be used, street suffixes/must not be used. Street suffixes/
Section 4.2.4:
s/address consideration/address considerations/
Section 4.2.5:
s/local names itself identify/local name itself identifies/
s/may either assist/may assist/
s/In case that/In the case that/
s/docuiment/document/
s/receipients/recipients/
Section 4.2.6:
s/address consideration/address considerations/
s/RECOMMENDED, however,/RECOMMENDED; however,/
Section 6.1.3:
s/Registration are sorted/Registrations are sorted/
Section 6.2:
s/form the official/from the official/
s/Austrian Building an Habitation registry/Austrian Building and
Habitation registry/
Appendix A:
s/an uniform/a uniform/
s/whole Austria/the whole of Austria/
Section A.1:
s/optional, the other Elements/optional, and the other Elements/
Section A.6:
s/URI to his RFC/URI to this RFC/
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