Comment(by bernard_aboba@…):
[James Polk]
#41: David Harrington's DISCUSS Comment(by bernard_aboba at ?):
Proposed Resolution: In 2.2.1.2, s/same respoonse. This is not useful
since/same response, since/ Replace Section 2.4.3 with the following:
A value of two for Altitude Type indicates that the Altitude value is
measured in floors. This value is relevant only in relation to a
building; the value is relative to the ground level of the building.
In this definition, numbering starts at ground level, which is floor
0 regardless of local convention. Floors located below ground level
could be represented by negative values.
I recommend a change to be definitive here with
s/could be/are
Larger values represent floors
that are above (higher in altitude) floors with lower values.
This sentence is written in one direction; i.e., up.
I recommend
"Larger values represent floors that are farther away from floor 0
such that -
- if positive, the floor value is farther above the ground floor.
- if negative, the floor value is farther below the ground floor."
Non-integer values can be used to represent intermediate or sub-
floors, such as mezzanine levels. Example: a
mezzanine between floor 1 and floor 2 could be represented as a value
= 1.1. Example: (2) mezzanines between floor 4 and floor 5 could be
represented as values = 4.1 and 4.2 respectively.
I'm fine with the rest as written.
James
[Bernard Aboba]
Here is a revised proposal for the text of Section 2.4.3:
2.4.3. Altitude in Floors (AType = 2)
A value of two for Altitude Type indicates that the Altitude value is
measured in floors. Since altitude in meters may not be known within
a building, a floor indication may be more useful. This value is
relevant only in relation to a building; the value is relative to the
ground level of the building.
Numbering starts at ground level, which is floor 0 regardless of
local convention. Floors located below ground level are represented
by negative values. Larger values represent floors that are farther
away from floor 0 such that:
- if positive, the floor value is farther above the ground floor.
- if negative, the floor value is farther below the ground floor.
Non-integer values can be used to represent intermediate or sub-
floors, such as mezzanine levels. Example: a mezzanine between floor
1 and floor 2 could be represented as a value of 1.1. Example:
mezzanines between floor 4 and floor 5 could be represented as values
of 4.1 and 4.2.
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Reporter: bernard_aboba@… | Owner: bernard_aboba@…
Type: defect | Status: new
Priority: major | Milestone: draft-ietf-geopriv-3825bis
Component: rfc3825bis | Version: 1.0
Severity: Submitted WG Document | Keywords:
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Ticket URL: <https://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/geopriv/trac/ticket/41#comment:3>
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