>#41: David Harrington's DISCUSS Comment(by
>bernard_aboba@…): Proposed Resolution: In
>2.2.1.2, s/same respoonse. This is not useful
>since/same response, since/ Replace Section 2.4.3 with the following:
>A value of two for Altitude Type indicates that the Altitude value is
>measured in floors. This value is relevant only in relation to a
>building; the value is relative to the ground level of the building.
>
>In this definition, numbering starts at ground level, which is floor
>0 regardless of local convention. Floors located below ground level
>could be represented by negative values.
I recommend a change to be definitive here with
s/could be/are
>Larger values represent floors
>that are above (higher in altitude) floors with lower values.
This sentence is written in one direction; i.e., up.
I recommend
"Larger values represent floors that are farther away from floor 0
such that -
- if positive, the floor value is farther above the ground floor.
- if negative, the floor value is farther below the ground floor."
>
>Non-integer values can be used to represent intermediate or sub-
>floors, such as mezzanine levels. Example: a
>mezzanine between floor 1 and floor 2 could be represented as a value
>= 1.1. Example: (2) mezzanines between floor 4 and floor 5 could be
>represented as values = 4.1 and 4.2 respectively.
I'm fine with the rest as written.
James
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>Reporter: bernard_aboba@… |
>Owner: bernard_aboba@… Type:
>defect | Status: new
> Priority: major
> | Milestone:
>draft-ietf-geopriv-3825bis
>Component: rfc3825bis |
>Version: 1.0 Severity:
>Submitted WG
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