Thanks for the comments; I agree with all of them.
I have added them to version -10 but I will wait for the IESG reviews
before I submit a new version.
Ciao
Hannes
PS: Did you review conclude that the functionality is about right? (not
too much / not too little) We had some discussions on this topic in the
past.
>-----Original Message-----
>From: geopriv-bounces@ietf.org
>[mailto:geopriv-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of ext Randall Gellens
>Sent: 13 February, 2010 02:33
>To: Rohan Mahy; Brian Rosen; Hannes Tschofenig
>Cc: geopriv@ietf.org; Hemish Parikh
>Subject: [Geopriv] A few small comments on
>draft-ietf-geopriv-loc-filters-09
>
>Hi Guys,
>
>Here are a few small comments on the filters draft:
>
>(1): There seems to be a copy-paste error: the captions of
>figures 3 and 4 say "Speed Change Example" but they should be
>"Element Value Change Example".
>
>(2) For clarification, it may be helpful to say in 3.1 and 3.2
>that the condition could be met by a change in any axis
>including altitude (x, y, or z).
>
>(3) In section 3.6, for clarification, it may be helpful
>(especially for readers not familiar with the subject) to add
>a sentence after the first sentence (after "...defines an
>extension ... rate of event notifications generated by the
>notifier") to the effect of "This allows a subscriber to have
>overall control over the stream of notifications, for example
>to avoid being flooded."
>
>--
>Randall Gellens
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