On Mar 27, 2010, at 6:16 PM, Hannes Tschofenig wrote:
> Hi Robert,
>
> thanks for your comments.
>
> Discuss (2010-03-10)
> Section 3.6 should be more clear on whether it is restricting the use of all the
> mechanics in event-rate-control, or only noting which of those mechanics need to
> be used to achieve the purpose addressed in this draft. In particular, I suggest
> changing "The implementation of only these two attributes" to "The use of only
> these two attributes".
>
> Ben Campbell's genart review comments are related.
>
> [hannes] we provided updated text.
>
>
> Comment (2010-03-10)
> These are very small nits:
>
> 2nd paragraph of 3.3 would read more correctly if you said A1, A2, A3 _and_ PC
> change.
>
> <changes> is a typo
>
> The labels for figure 3 and 4 are wrong - should say Element Value Change
> Example
>
> [hannes] Fixed those.
>
> Ciao
> Hannes
>
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