In the new parts about DHCPv4 option 15, can you explain why you don't
use 2119 language? In both section 2 and section 3.4 you say that
DHCPv4 option 15 "is used" (as opposed to, e.g., "SHOULD be used"), so
it sounds like you're stating a fact rather than giving a direction to
implementers.
Thanks,
Alissa
On Dec 8, 2009, at 9:21 PM, Thomson, Martin wrote:
> In addition to the minor changes suggested on the list, this latest
> version addresses comments that came up in the AD review.
>
> The document is now less negative towards use of DHCPv4 option 15.
> Section 4.1 has been moved to Section 3.4 and Section 3 has been
> renamed accordingly. There is also a flow chart that should make it
> easy for implementers to understand how all the pieces fit together.
>
> The diff shows the changes:
>
> <http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-geopriv-lis-discovery-13.txt
> >
>
> --Martin
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>> Discovery of the correct Location Information Server (LIS) in the
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